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Volcanic Eruption
WALA: Writing sentences that pull you into the story then put it in a narrative. P.S haven't finished my resolution yet.
Volcanic eruption
O It was a hot summer's day and people were out at the beach. Lots of children and adults were playing about in the water.
C It was all at peace, then suddenly, bam ,smoke was rising. There was a massive rumble in the ground. You felt like you were in a massive massage chair.
S The volcano had Erupted. Red hot lava was coming down the volcano burning down the little Hawaiian village, destroying houses one by one.
O People screamed and ran for their lives. Some didn’t make because the lava caught up and dragged people under like a crocodile with its prey.
E The village was destroyed, no buildings were standing, the town was now completely gone.
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