Title: Animals in the zoo
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Macro: There are many animals from different countries around the world in zoos.
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Macro: All zoo animals live in different enclosures, suited to them so people can safely see them.
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Link sentence: Lions, giraffes & pandas are some of the animals that you will find in the zoo.
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Noun:
Lions
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are very large animals from the cat family. They are a tawny brown colour. Their fur & manes are very rough.
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Giraffes
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are tall, skinny animals. Their skin is very rough. They have been in zoos for decades.
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Pandas
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are big & round animals. They are black & white. They like to eat bamboo.
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Conclusion: Many people go to zoos to get a close look at the animals safely. The animals in the zoos are from different countries so you don’t have to travel so far. The animals go in different enclosures that suits them. The animals are in zoos because the animals are not easily accessible.
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