Wednesday 24 May 2017

Description for the Cobblestone path

Description for Cobblestone path

If this colour that means I have used them.

Shape: Rectangular
Size: Small cracks
Number: Thousands of cracks
Texture: Rough
Doing: lying, Motionless
Position: Old court corner
Colour: All Greys, Rusted, greyish blue

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3 comments:

  1. Unknown26 May 2017 at 17:02

    Hi Jess I can see you've used the description bubble really effectively to give you a good range of ideas and words to use in crafting your poem. Miss J

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  2. Anonymous26 May 2017 at 17:35

    thanks

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  3. Anonymous15 June 2017 at 14:21

    I like the way that you have described it really well and I like the way you described the number with thousands of cracks, From Eilish.

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Thanks for your positive, thoughtful and helpful comment on my work.

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