Wednesday 24 May 2017

The Cobblestone path

WALT: write poetic writing
Cobblestone path
As the children play I get older and weaker.
All day and night, I lay there motionless.
The light blues and greys, faded and turned to rust.
* I am as rough as sandpaper although some children are so tough that they can walk in their bare feet.
*Thousands of cracks, the colour just black, start to suddenly grow.
The rectangular path fits perfectly in the old court corner.





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Verb-preposition-adverb
Adjective-repetition-pronoun
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown2 August 2017 at 11:51

    Kia Ora Jessica!
    Well done this looks like amazing writing!
    Did anyone help you do this?
    If they didn't wow!
    I like how you have put lots of Verbs!
    Na Ella

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    1. Anonymous3 August 2017 at 19:34

      Hello Ella
      Just two inform you we had two do all of it ourselves and i'm glad you enjoyed it.
      Thanks a lot for the great comment
      From Jessica
      Blog ya later

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