WALT: write poetic writing
Cobblestone path
As the children play I get older and weaker.
All day and night, I lay there motionless.
The light blues and greys, faded and turned to rust.
* I am as rough as sandpaper although some children are so tough that they can walk in their bare feet.
*Thousands of cracks, the colour just black, start to suddenly grow.
The rectangular path fits perfectly in the old court corner.
Nouns-simile-enjambment *
Verb-preposition-adverb
Adjective-repetition-pronoun
Kia Ora Jessica!
ReplyDeleteWell done this looks like amazing writing!
Did anyone help you do this?
If they didn't wow!
I like how you have put lots of Verbs!
Na Ella
Hello Ella
DeleteJust two inform you we had two do all of it ourselves and i'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks a lot for the great comment
From Jessica
Blog ya later